Training Their Mate Pack Wars Book 1 edition by Vella Day Literature Fiction eBooks
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WARNING Hot sex and even hotter military werewolves
GENRE Paranormal Werewolf Romance, Paranormal Erotica, Paranormal Menage (MFM)
SERIES Pack Wars
She failed to stop him. Now he’s coming after her.
Liz Wharton has one goal—to kill the man who raped her mother. Had she known Harvey Couch was a werewolf, she never would have tried to take him on by herself.
Determined to put an end to the pest bent on revenge, Harvey sends his goons after her. When two wolves attack her, Liz is sure she’s hallucinating. Good thing Trax Field is there to stop them.
Trax and Dante Field, members of the Pack, have devoted their lives to stopping bad shifters like Harvey Couch. Saving Liz would have been just an ordinary day, but when Trax finds her huddled in an alley, bruised and shaken, he’s convinced she’s his mate.
To keep her safe, Trax and Dante hold her captive in their loft apartment. When they aren’t searching for Couch, Trax and his brother spend the night training their future mate in the art of bondage and sensual pleasures. How will they be able to convert her into embracing not only their lifestyle but also their animalistic side?
Training Their Mate Pack Wars Book 1 edition by Vella Day Literature Fiction eBooks
This book read exactly like when a person has a dream: there isn't any rational explanation as to why things are happening but everyone seems okay with it and just keeps going along until you wake up thinking "WTF was that?".Labeling this as romance is beyond inaccurate. The main characters didn't show any love for each other, just an over abundance of sexual hormones. Sure, menages who love each other can have bouts of hardcore sex but that is all there is here and it's impossible to believe the men love their woman because she lets them poke her wherever while exclaiming how ready and needy she is.
The plot has holes a mile-wide. The two main male characters are werewolves and brothers and happen to chance upon meeting their mate when she's in distress. They take her home, unwillingly, and within half an hour there she's already having shower sex with one of them. The brothers worry about her being followed and tracked and although they take away her gun for everyone's safety they don't stop to think about taking her cellphone away? The villain deals in human trafficking and wants her but no one stopped to think that he might have the ability to track her phone for location?
By the time the girl learns they are werewolves, she insists on leaving the guys and they let her without any type of communication pleading how much they want her to stay. Ten pages later when they reunite it's all about sex in the playroom again which only reinforces that there is no romance in this story, just carnal gratification.
I would not recommend nor read this story again. Nor would I be interested in future stories from this series.
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Training Their Mate Pack Wars Book 1 edition by Vella Day Literature Fiction eBooks Reviews
I love shifter/menage books but this one... *sigh* I hate saying it but it was kinda boring for me. The sex scenes were too long (not a huge fan of stretched out, delayed gratification sex), the mystery just wasn't that interesting & the characters were a little flat too. Add in the fact that it ended on a cliffhanger... Ugh. Probably won't be continuing on with this series.
This is roughly 35% story and 65% sex. Now I like shifter books and I like steamy books, but I like it more when it's more 50/50 or at least if the sex out weighs the storyline that the story be good. Just certain things seemed too idk easy even for a fictional shifter book. Like when our h tells her best friend she has not only seen werewolves but slept with them her friends first words are of expectance. Now I would think her friend would want to get her committed or at least take a few minutes of convincing that werewolves are real. Idk it's a good book if you just want to read about shifter sex with no real story.
Well, after putting this book down for over a year I finally, yes finally finished it. It's a tale of a human woman who meets werewolf brothers and falls in lust and love with both boys.
I do want to warn you all this is straight pornography with a SM Bondage twist. It's very sexist and it's definitely all hetero Sex.
I had hoped the two brothers would help each other, and be included with each other. But they never, ever touch each other, even when having a threesome with the main character. Yes, sadly it was straight sex, not like the group parties I've attended where anything goes between the participants.
To that end, I can't fully recommend this novel. There are better Shifter novels out there.
Seriously. Who edited this? Was there ANY at all? Because it sure didn't read like there was. I agree with many of the other reviewers who stated that the story seemed disjointed and superficial. I couldn't even get to the sex scenes because I was having such a hard time following along. There was little to no world-building and things were going a little too fast. Ms. Day really should employ a content editor, it would do her a great deal of good.
The story starts off pretty well, but apparently the three main characters all lose every lick of sense they ever had as soon as they get anywhere near each other. One of the guys, supposed to be a tactical badass, makes idiotic mistakes that put people at risk. After said mistakes, the heroine forgives him cos he calls her sweetie. The author can't seem to keep straight from chapter to chapter (or paragraph to paragraph at times) the specifics of what the bad guy did.
But the sex scenes are *smoking* hot.
I think this book has a lot of promise. I liked the BDSM shifter aspect, but don't think there was enough background on any of the characters to really pull it off. The sex scenes were VERY steamy, but I have a problem with how the 2 main H's approached a kinky relationship. They never received consent from the h. Never even discussed it. Consent is BIG in the BDSM lifestyle. Then to have a sexual relationship start the NIGHT all 3 met? Not very believable. Then you add in some editing issues and you have a story that needs work to make it better.
Overall though I did enjoy the book and am considering continuing with the series.
I downloaded this book thinking it was another series, also called Pack Wars, that a friend of mine raved about. It didn't take me long to realize this was not the series. I like Vella Day's books but this was a great disappointment. It starts off nice, you think there is going to be some adventure and suspense, after all, people are trying to kill the woman. That hope's are quickly flushed as soon and Heckle and Jeckle are introduced. Then it's ALL about sex with a small reminder there is supposed to be something else going on. The rest of the books in the series are just as insulting.
If you are a glutton for menages with plots that don't follow through, this series is definitely for you. I'm tired of ranting about the lack of editing. With so many apps out there, free and otherwise, to check your writing these days, I just chalk it up to the authors being plain lazy.
This book read exactly like when a person has a dream there isn't any rational explanation as to why things are happening but everyone seems okay with it and just keeps going along until you wake up thinking "WTF was that?".
Labeling this as romance is beyond inaccurate. The main characters didn't show any love for each other, just an over abundance of sexual hormones. Sure, menages who love each other can have bouts of hardcore sex but that is all there is here and it's impossible to believe the men love their woman because she lets them poke her wherever while exclaiming how ready and needy she is.
The plot has holes a mile-wide. The two main male characters are werewolves and brothers and happen to chance upon meeting their mate when she's in distress. They take her home, unwillingly, and within half an hour there she's already having shower sex with one of them. The brothers worry about her being followed and tracked and although they take away her gun for everyone's safety they don't stop to think about taking her cellphone away? The villain deals in human trafficking and wants her but no one stopped to think that he might have the ability to track her phone for location?
By the time the girl learns they are werewolves, she insists on leaving the guys and they let her without any type of communication pleading how much they want her to stay. Ten pages later when they reunite it's all about sex in the playroom again which only reinforces that there is no romance in this story, just carnal gratification.
I would not recommend nor read this story again. Nor would I be interested in future stories from this series.
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